我的老师 y "teaher" 演讲稿
本文曾获得北京电视台、国家教育部举办的 y teaher 英语演讲比赛优胜奖。在以“我的老师”为主题的演讲会上，这篇演讲出人意料地将计算机称作自己的老师，以吸引听众的注意。然后又用事实与推理证明计算机确实是一个“老师”，从而赢得了听众的共鸣。某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下：
(1)在every后，territory用复数，显然是错误的。另外，表示“各个领域”，用field为好。
(2)原文时态用错了。
(3)onept是可数名词。ake后的宾语补语如果是不定式的话，要省略to。另外，一般不用被动不定式，而只用过去分词。deeply也有中国式英语之嫌。
(4)help sb. (to)do，不用 doin。
ladies and entleen,
i have had a lot of teahers in y shool who have iven e uh help in y study. for their help i will never foret the. but today i a oin to talk about a speial teaher of ine. this teaher is not a huan bein and its nae is“oputer”. it has been teahin e a lot of knowlede and i appreiate it very uh.
how an i interat with a oputer? there are any ways, inludin keyboard, ouse pointer, and touh sreen. i often use a keyboard. when i press riht keys, i an see and hear whatever i want. inforation world is at y finertip. i wish that true speeh input-output syste would be invented one day.
as teahers, oputers have a lot of virtues： they are positive, they have ood eories and never lose any inforation stored in the. they have uh knowlede in every field. they an let out all kinds of sounds, and an also iprove the effiieny of our study. for exaple, if i want to, i an skip soe hapters so that i an study at y own pae.
althouh oputers will never take the plae of huan teahers, they are weloed by ore and ore learners. oputers will ontinue to evolve(发展)with the aid of odern tehnoloies. oputers are so powerful, helpful and iportant that everybody needs it, espeially in the future! i love y oputer teaher!
thank you.
北京市第十五中学高中 秦 燕